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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!


*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Excellent take on the photo prompt.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Person* [Character]
Glaess and Cyik are the perfect characters for this story. I enjoyed their interactions.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I thought the story was pretty great. I was taken by surprise by the middle of the story when I realized that awesome twist. The ending the perfect for the story, and left me wanting to know more of their world, and the reactions they received when they got back. Well done!


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