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Respawn  [18+]
A futuristic tale of betrayal and having loyalty tested.
by Author Ed Anderson
Review of Respawn  
Review by Lonewolf
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!


*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Great take on the photo prompt.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Person* [Character]
I thought the evolution of the gaming A.I. was excellent. The process it goes through dealing with everything was great.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I enjoyed the story as a whole, and loved how the A.I. progressed through the story. The ending was perfect also, and the characters created for this were good too. I'd love to see more of this as I'm a big fan of the litRpg genre. Good job.


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