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Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!


*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Very good use of the photo prompt.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.


*Person* [Character]
Jennifer is a well rounded character that was perfect for this story. Mark Edwards came off as a good choice for a love interest. Mark's addition to the story was quite interesting.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
The story left me puzzled to a point. I wondered why Jennifer wasn't simply told some personal things for her to believe what was told to her. The ending wasn't expected per se, but overall I thought it was a good story. Well done.


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