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 Sing a song of Taj Mahal  [13+]
Built by the Mughals.
by S.z.kamoonpuri
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello!S.z.kamoonpuri

It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Sing a song of Taj Mahal"  on behalf of the "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP". I love reading a poem and I thought the poems you have here really beautiful.

First Impression: I like this free verse poem about Taj Mahal.

The poem: Beautifully told and written. You will be surprised to know that I am yet to visit one of the seven wonders of the world Taj Mahal!

yes, I have a great desire to visit it once. I like the way you have crafted your words in this poem. The rhythm of this poem is absolutely beautiful. you have breaks and spaces right where you need them and punctuation seem good to me even, though, I'm not expert in the same.

I find a couple an of mistakes for example: “It's a Mecca for tourists”. You can change it “It’s a treasure for tourists”. And capitalized the words Shah jahan to “Shah Jahan” otherwise it’s a wonderful poem. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

Favorite Lines: I like the humorous ending
“Each of the marbled minarets
conceal such romantic secrets
for lovers to silently explore
to admire and to adore.”

Overall Impression: I like the A beautiful poem. Wonderfully portrayed. I enjoyed it. I'm a huge fan of the narratives of your poems. Thank you for sharing.

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

Have a good day!

Happy Writing!

Mina  




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