Robert, I was very moved by your poem. It touched my heart. As a Christian, I see the gospel and the 'circle of time' as they call it now.

Your first line at first made me think of a science fiction movie. I saw space ships heading out like a plague to infest other planets of who knows where. Then I thought of the garden of Eden and how we left perfection and started the ruin of out planet.

"our parchments been inked" made me think of a court order or finding. It's done and that's all she wrote. Very sad.

"The world will breathe a sigh" A sigh of relief? A time to refresh, to start over.


It says in scripture that the earth will be changed. I think you told he story very well here. Well done. Thanks so much for sharing with us.
Love, LinnAnn