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Bon jour, Ken, and happy early 9th 'birthday' on here!
First off, I want to apologize for never having read or reviewed this. It’s my own contest and I try to read the winners as much as possible, but apparently this one fell through the cracks. Sorry.
I really enjoyed this little tale. The idea of Vlad the Impaler still being around and giving guided tours through his old castle was a great idea of yours. Almost as good as Vlad’s idea of doing it so he could reap the bloody rewards of an unsuspecting tourist that won’t be missed! *Vamp*
Great use of the prompt phrase, and that ending, even humorous, was a cool way to end this!
Sorry to be so picky, but I spot a couple of tiny niggles (I think):
"...also known a(s) 'Vlad the Impaler' or 'The Son of the Dragon'"
'which translates from Draculea in Romanian!" (misspelled? Dracula?)
Otherwise, great job, and congratulations on the victory!
PS-Even though I write a lot of horror, I have yet to write a story about a Zombie or a vampire. Zombies are so cliché these days, and vamps have been written about more times than I want to know. But after reading this, it's inspired me to try to write a vamp story! Thank you!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my fiend friend! Have a really groovy day, and...

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