Hello JT

This is an Angel Review   

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I was draw in to read this poem, the title pulled me in. I feel it fits the poem and it lives up to my expectations of the poem.

Each line flows nicely into the next, making it easy to read and understand. It also adds to the rhythm. Great word selection and placement.

I like the poem as a whole, however, my favorite lines are
Of our nightmares lying in waiting
To destroy our souls
There is so much intensity written into this poem.

A suggestion would be to add punctuation.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Fate.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .