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| Ahoy, Daniel! I was liking this before I even realized who your characters were, but it didn't take long to figure it out! I thought this was great! It's so neat to see somebody else's take on little donny j, and you really hit the nail on the head with this piece! You have a lot of his little traits in here, from bragging about himself to constantly talking about Hillary to even having Vladimir Putin mentioned. And his childish behavior was the icing on the cake! Well, that and those final two words! Excellent job, my friend! I was laughing from the 1st word to the last! For only using 300 words you described tiny little trump perfectly. And I'm sure if you would have had 500 words to use, you could have added a lot more! I'd wish you good luck, but I'll bet my last dollar that won't need any! If this doesn't win, then I'll make a complaint to Arakun the Twisted Raccoon  myself!Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! It was a true pleasure to read, and...
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
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