Hello Spidey

This is an Angel Review   

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I can so relate to this poem. I wish I was on a deserted beach, toes in the sand, dreaming of nothing.

Okay, back to reality. I like the title, it fit perfectly with this poem. It sets the mood and lived up to my expectations of the poem. The imagery and emotions are easily seen and felt. The rhythm is smooth and flows nicely. Good use of words and punctuation.

in caressing sands of misplaced time.
My favorite line. I love the thought of misplaced time.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Lost on the Wind.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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