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Hi there, Calico.
After reading this, I think I can answer your 'problem' in a nutshell: you're growing up.
You haven't filled out your bio yet so I don't know how old you are (I'm pretty sure you're older than nine, though). But everybody goes through this stage, and I hate to tell you, but it's probably only going to get worse.
I will leave you with some words of wisdom (I'm 52, so I think I can do that): Nobody said growing up would be easy, and you did a good job of showing that with this piece. You're going through a stage where you're not sure who you are or who/what you want to be. Take your time, my friend! You'll be surprised how quick your childhood will disappear, and once it's gone you'll never get it back! Have fun while you're still young-enjoy this time of your life while you can!
There was a lot of missing commas in this and a few other grammar errors, but I won't point those out. You were trying to get something off your chest, and that's what mattered.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Calico, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-You might want to get your biography set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite authors/books, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PPS-Since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  to get a feel of Writing.Com and introduce yourself to the community!

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