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Hi there, Jade.
I thought this was a really nice piece about how two people can bond and become closer than they ever would have imagined, and you told it in a very nice way.
I know it must have been hard for both of you to say goodbye, but from the way I was interpreting it about halfway through, I was worried that that 'goodbye' was going to be a different (and permanent) type of 'goodbye'. Suffice it to say a lot sadder one than the one you had.
I claim to be a pretty thick-skinned person myself, but I've noticed that as I get older it's getting harder and harder to withhold my emotions. I've also been known to drop a tear or two lately, so it doesn't surprise me at all that you did after what he said. I'm glad it wasn't!
You did a great job writing this, and you don't need to have any regrets about not being able to express your feelings about it; you did very well, and frankly, I don't think you could have done it any better!
There's a few tiny spelling niggles in this, but considering the subject matter, I don't think they're even relevant.
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend. Thanks for sharing this, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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