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 A Danger to Society  [13+]
Humor, Comedy, Silliness
by Jules
Review by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Season's greetings, Jules!
I though this was pretty good! Whudathunk that one of the most powerful weapons ever developed by mankind would be a soft, snuggly, new fabric? *Laugh*
I like the way you told this, and you've got a good sense of humor (I read you port intro). Unfortunately though, I don't think this Snuzzle stuff is going to dissuade that lunatic from launching any more of his missiles. As little donny j trump would say: sad.
Very well written, Jules! The spelling and grammar were excellent, but I did spot one tiny niggle:
'assasisnation' should be 'assassination'
Otherwise, nice job! Kind of an odd ending, but a nice job nonetheless!
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