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 Mary Short  [E]
Waiting to buy gifts the day before Christmas.
by Jatog the Green
Review of Mary Short  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering! *Delight*

I am reading and reviewing your item at 10:00AM WDC time, and storing it in my review tool for later delivery, after the contest winners are announced. As per the contest rules, no subsequent revisions or edits were considered in writing this review.

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that Mary has a lot of determination. I am more in tune with her earlier policy because if you leave it until the last day so many things can go wrong. Mr. HOOves is someone who did this more years than not and nothing ever went amiss for him. But, I know if I did it, it would be a disaster. There would be a blizzard or the stores would have nothing. LoL

October sounds pretty good for starters.

You did a fine job of using the prompt words and writing an engaging and entertaining poem.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Mary mused as the days of October flew by
munching ice cream and chocolate beads on the fly,
tending readily to her Tae Bo to keep lean,
grinning ear to ear as trick-or-treaters were seen."

This is contradictory behavior that I could identify with.

Great and entertaining poem! Well done!

*Thumbsup*

The Writer's Cramp is a great way to meet other writers (by reviewing their entries) and to get your work read. Also, many Newsletter items featured and Quill entries have originated from experienced writers who regularly read in "The Writer's Cramp" . Whether you win or not on a particular day, rest assured that your item will be read by those on this site who enjoy reading for its own sake.

tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 

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