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Special Delivery  [E]
Where DO babies come from?
by Genipher
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!

I am reviewing this at 9:40 AM WDC time and storing the review in my review tool for later delivery. No subsequent edits (after 9:40 AM) will be considered as per the rules posted in the forum.

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Awww, this was so precious. I love how the storks interact with each other as they streamline the process of delivery.

The title is perfect and you did a fine job of using all the prompts. The idea of the overbearing supervisor seemed very Dickensian Christmassy to me, too.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I loved when the little girl gave the novice her necklace. Twin sisters is quite a precious gift, indeed.

Very heartwarming, original and well written!

*Thumbsup*

tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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