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 At The Mall  [ASR]
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by THANKFUL SONALI Now What?
Review of At The Mall  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am the last minute fill-in judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering! *Delight*

I am reading and reviewing your item at 11:49 AM WDC time. As per the contest rules, no subsequent revisions or edits were considered in writing this review.

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I love the romance of it all. This could be expanded into a wonderful short story. I was rooting for this shy young man all the way through.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*Oh, this was my favorite part, but I loved it all. I do love a great romance. Here is the part that sticks with me:

"He realised she was standing
Under the mistletoe
"You can do it, young man
GO JUST GO."

I LOVED the fact that she wanted him to kiss her. How romantic and lovely! Great work! *Heart**Heartg*

The Writer's Cramp is a great way to meet other writers (by reviewing their entries) and to get your work read. Also, many Newsletter items featured and Quill entries have originated from experienced writers who regularly read in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Whether you win or not on a particular day, rest assured that your item will be read by those on this site who enjoy reading for its own sake.

tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 

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