Wow! You have really captured the life of this character through the eyes of the plant. Your use of personification is terrific and I could really feel what the plant was feeling about this man's life. The picture of a lonely somewhat depressive person is so clear from your vivid detailed descriptions. His caring and hope for the plant shows another layer of his being. The voice of the plant is consistent and potent.

I could follow the story with ease and like how you describe the tv etc. with terms as the plant would not knwo what to call them. It makes the observing voice believeable. Your story evokes the reader to feel for the character and hope along with the plant.

Thanks for sharing your evocative and vivid, creative expression! Wonderful picture.

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