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| (4.5)| A gift as part of your "Invalid Item" SuperMud Facial Mask Package from your Secret Pal. Enjoy!  Hi Rhoswen!  I love trees and how sacred they are. There is nothing like standing near a tree and feeling its vibration! Tree hugging is fun. I like how you write this poem as a dialogue with the oak. It reminds me of a retreat I did where we were to meditate on certain questions in each direction and element. I wrote a lot of poem messages. The retreat ended with a sweat lodge and wow! Powerful! Using the Oak as the wise one is a wonderful choice as it has that symbolism. The poem is simple as nature itself with clear query. I like how you turn the question at the end...the important query about how we see our self. I would love to know the reflection that the tree gave back. The repetition of the name emphasizes the importance of the tree and the personifcation is well done. It was easy to read with a simple effective rhyme. The idea of a "silent cry" is evocative as I think of the tree hearing beyond the words.  Thanks for sharing this simple inspirational piece. I enjoyed entering into the vision.eyestar fairy elf helper at "Invalid Item" Sorry for the delay. Snail Mail at xmas time.  ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **
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