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 Irrelevant?  [ASR]
She needed some persuading! Joint Winner, Cramp.
by THANKFUL SONALI 17 WDC YEARS!
Review of Irrelevant?  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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What brought HOOves to meander and glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Balloonr*I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering! *Delight*

I am reading and reviewing your item at 11:25 WDC time, and storing it in my review tool for later delivery, after the contest winners are announced. As per the contest rules, no subsequent revisions or edits were considered in writing this review.

What does HOOves think about and contemplate while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Everyone should have a granddaughter who believes in them like Hemlata's does. Anshul is a very special person who puts the needs of others (like her grandmother) in front of her own. That is unselfish and even a noble character trait.

I wasn't sure about the title of this, but I couldn't come up with a better one. You might want to noodle around with it. She thinks she is irrelevant because of the doubts (as per the quote) and is stopped from doing things because of this feeling. Her granddaughter shows her, through words and overt actions, what possibilities lay ahead if one has an open mind and dedication.

What does HOOves applaud and moo about while reading your item?

I really like that Anshul gets Hemlata to believe in herself after a difficult time of loss. That is inspirational to anyone who might be afraid to try. They would say if she can do it, so can I.

Lovely, original story - you did well with the prompt!

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The Writer's Cramp is a great way to meet other writers (by reviewing their entries) and to get your work read. Also, many Newsletter items featured and Quill entries have originated from experienced writers who regularly read in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Whether you win or not on a particular day, rest assured that your item will be read by those on this site who enjoy reading for its own sake.

4ps a.k.a. HOOves, sometimes tHiNg

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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