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Review #4382398
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Flash Fiction Entries  [ASR]
My collection of flash fiction entries.
by Happy May 2024!
         Review for entry/chapter: "Escape
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Connieann

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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Great flash fiction story. While looking through your stories this one caught my attention. What and who is escaping and why. I have to say you kept me on the edge of my seat.

The plot moves fast. The setting is great. I could see everything as I read. You left me wondering what happened? What is going to happen
to the boy? Was it demons or voices in his head that made him do it? I guess I will never know.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


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