What brought me here
This is one of my favorite authors placing an entry into one of my favorite contests. How could I resist?

What kept me here
A quick glance revealed a short, easy to read, professionally styled piece of quick-witted poetry. I was hooked.

What I liked best
The piece bubbled with good humor building up over each stanza. Ah, the double life of a parent/writer.

The natural way the prompts were included in the first and last lines framed the piece nicely.

There was only one spelling error as noted below.

My favorite sentence was
She should have known better
The story, all but done
Sat with blinking curser mouse
Was clicked off by her son!

Now there is a world of angst in those lines. Emotion is what drives impact in a poem or story of any kind. good job.

What could be improved
Curser is spelled cursor. Not bad for a tightly woven tale and hardly noticed while reading

Summary
A fun read worth taping on the fridge. Thanks for sharing.

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