What brought me here
Congratulations in being featured in this week's WDC Comedy Newsletter. I came to see why the editor added you to the list.

What kept me here
Comedy is something we all share and think we are great at. Your receiving a ribbon caught me eye. Having others recognize humor worth reading is worth more than a first glance. I was hooked. I read on.

What I liked best
I'm almost at a loss for words. I think I'll be pasting this on bathroom stall walls until I die. (if permission is granted by the author.) It deserves being published elsewhere but sadly I'm not a publisher.

So much done in so few well-chosen words. Each line drives on to the next like a steamroller. No technical errors interfered along the reading path. Good job.

My favorite sentence was
"Not really," was my answer "I just didn't want to cum too fast!"

What a chuckle . This last line gave a surprising twist to the ending I truly enjoyed. When you can bring emotion to the table you've won already as an author.

What could be improved
Give the unwary reader a copy of Reader's Digest to show the female sitting next to him to hide holding this in hand. He'll need it for protection.

Summary
A delightful romp showing off this author's wicked imagination. Thanks for sharing.

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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .