What brought me here
A click on 'Read & Review'. I liked the title and idea mentioned in the description below it. A chat show with a webcam? This could be a fun read.

What kept me here
The surreal images portrayed in simple words. There's a lot of action going on here. I jumped from paragraph to the next hoping my feet wouldn't fall out from under me. Thankfully, I rose to the occasion.

What I liked best
I liked the questions asked. Miley's responses played well against them.

The main characters flew all over the place while staying in one place. Amazing. It made the piece feel a little mind-blowing and disjointed but I suppose that was the plan. The impact left in my mind had me thinking about this piece long after finishing reading. Good job.

Adding white space between paragraphs made for easier online viewing. I appreciated that

My favorite sentence was
Coca~Cola used to sell their soda with the cocaine in it.

Adding this piece of true folk wisdom was a winner. Reality juts its head in the most unusual places, doesn't it?

What could be improved
I noticed only one misspelled word in the story. It is short enough I won't go back and find it but it is hanging around somewhere in the smoke between Muzzy and Miley.

Jumping around the way it was written broke up the flow of reading some. There was a lot to think about reading from line to line.

Summary
I enjoyed a peek into this author's unusually perceptive imagination. I'm a satire lover from way back. The adult language may limit the reading audience and offend some but for those willing to put that aside, this is one sweet patootie of a read.

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