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our witch  [ASR]
there was an old lady, we made her our witch
by Cappucine
Review of our witch  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

A terrific poem about a witch. The words you chose gives good imagery and a true picture of a witch. This poem has a nice flow to it. And a kind of bouncy rhythm.

I can see an older lady in her garden harvesting flowers and herbs for her spells and healing. Great job, I feel this piece is well written.

by the cutting-edge moon,
I love the way you describe the moon.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


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