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Another Lovely Signature for My Collection



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You visited me recently with some nice reviews, so here I am to read and send a review for your poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how derailed and defeated I have felt at times when things didn't go how I wanted them to go. I guess we all have been there in one way or another. The analogy to what happens with a train is well taken. Things have to be picked up and put back on track after any time when life goes off the rails.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I was struck by this part in particular:

"Where error offers pain filled clue
And truth hides in the mirror we resist."

Sooner or later we all have to learn from our mistakes and missteps, or we just keep on repeating things. I think it is the will to carry on and try again (and not give up) that comes through loud and clear.

We all need to do that in order to grow and change. Sometimes, it is more difficult than others and takes longer.

It is the trying again and continuing to try that defines us all in the end.

Very fine poem with a powerful and helpful message. Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.

You need all sorts of reviewers for all sorts of writers. We can't all write a dissertation every time. If I did that, I'd do about six reviews a year.

*Sun*Rumination Termination*Tulipp*


Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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