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Given: Jan 18, 2018 at 2:37pm
Length: 1,385 Characters |
1,115 w/o WritingML
Greetings, Kate! For an introductory piece, this isn't bad. It's about as short as it can get though, but that doesn't necessarily take anything away from it. It feels like a short children's story, and I like the friendly atmosphere you gave to it in spite of what could have happened. The spelling and grammar were excellent, which makes me wonder how old you are. As I said, it feel likes a children's story, or possibly even a story a child would write. Regardless, it's a nice 'feel good' piece. Kee ponw ritin gon, Kate, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your biography set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite authors/books, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PPS-Since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" to get a feel of Writing.Com and introduce yourself to the community!
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