Hello!

First I want to welcome you WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you.

Initial Impression : This is a beautiful but sad poem. I like how you woven your thought into words. Yes, when our heart is broken it is the saddest thing in the world.

Theme and Creativity :Your poem flowed smoothly with your crafted words.

The poem : I feel the sense of sadness woven in this poem.
My favorite lines
“The way you laugh
The way you walk and talk
You may not see me anymore
And that's ok”
Final Impression: : A beautiful poem.
Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  

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