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 Oreo's Backyard Adventure  [E]
This is one of my many short stories I hope you like it!!!!!
by Kate
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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It's been pleasure to review on behalf of Simply Positive Group.

This is short and sweet story of friendship. I like the happy endings of how the friends drove the unfriendly eagle. That's what a friend does. Friends help each other out as needed.

Suggestion:You can make bigger story from everything I just read. It would be interesting.

Thank you for sharing your work! Keep writing.

This is my opinion only. Thanks for sharing your awesome work with us. Its pleasure to know someone like you.


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