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General Impression: I just read your piece "Invalid Item" . This is a sweet tribute for a heartfelt friendship.

The Poem: The poem is about the friends who helps us to grow. You wrote beautifully what friendship truly mean.

Friends makes us laugh, and we can share our thoughts with them. Life becomes dusty bleak desert without friends. I like the words of this poem. The way you wrote can easily read.

Favorite parts:

My tears have dried!
Loneliness died!

yes, there are always there for us to wipe out our tears.

Closing Comments: Friendship is a good subject for poetry. I enjoyed it reading. I understood this was written from personal experience and it looks great. I like the thought woven in this piece. Thank you for sharing.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Best of luck with all of your writing.
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