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Barely Breathing  [18+]
This is about as poetic as bipolar gets.
by Nikola~Loving Her Gracie Girl!
Review of Barely Breathing  
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Hello Nikola,

I am here to review your poem as part of the "Invalid Item.

I chose your poem because the title got my attention and with the mention of 'bipolar' in the intro, I felt this would be something I could relate to.

I liked the phrase you used to describe the racing thoughts: Racing thoughts play bumper cars in my head.. That is a good description; there are days the racing thoughts give the illusion of a NASCAR race, but there are those days that the thoughts just mindlessly crash into each other.

You did a good job capturing some of the high and lows, your poem is accurate and relatable.

Please feel free to join us at "Invalid Item. We are a friendly, supportive group, and we enjoy sharing laughs too.

Thank you for sharing this poem with us and please, keep writing!

Kindest Regards, Lilli

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