Hello willwilcox, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I picked "Mistaken"  to read and review as part of the February "Invalid Item" . The cover of the spider sent chills up my spine and aroused my curiosity.

My First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Simon Nabo's dream. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense and the terror.

My Favorite Part: I like the descriptions because they revealed both Simon's and the clerk's fears.

My Final Thoughts and/or Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I enjoyed reading this frightening story because it sent chills of my spine.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .