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Hello Karen!

I am doing this review on behalf of "Invalid Item to fulfill the task for Day 9: Review a Member of the MHWA.

What a great little tale! When I read the intro I was not expecting the story to turn out the way it did. Good grief, I think that's the most common lie; when we check that box that says, "Yes, I've read and agree to the terms." Might make me think twice now, LOL.

For such a short story you fit a lot in there! It flowed along great and was wildly entertaining! I did not see any spelling or grammatical errors. I liked the dialogue. And that last line... Oh, Snap! Fun story! Thanks for sharing!

Lilli Siggy

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