Hello Amarra,

I popped over to your profile to return your kind review favor and noticed that you are a newbie, like me. Welcome to writing.com! Congratulations on publishing your first item here! Congratulations on your upcoming marriage too! I wish you every success in love, life and your budding writing career!

Your short story was very interesting. There's a lot of ambiguity to allow the reader's mind to go in many creative directions. The reference to Gabriel made me think of angels. And Micheal isn't far off from Michael, another famous angel. But with the sci-fi label and some other clues it seemed like maybe it was an alien story.

I love the title you chose, "Atoms in the Air" as it was intriguing and made me want to read the story.

I wondered if you were writing this for fun, for a contest, or for a specific market? I wondered what inspired you to write this story. I definitely wondered what "It" was and what would happen to It once it adjusted to its new form. Which made me wonder if you had a whole book in mind to follow this story. One never knows and I'm a curious sort.

Again, welcome to writing.com! I love it here and hope you do too!

PWheeler

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