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 Transients  [13+]
A field trip to the twenty-first century.
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Review of Transients  
Review by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi there, Ken! Caught this on a Read & Review, and glad I did.
This is kind of strange-I was wondering why you were leaving out certain letters (vowels) of people's names at first, but since it was the 21st century I figured that would be expected. But we're already 18 years into the 21st century, and I have yet to see this phenomenon take place.
This seemed a little confusing to me at first, but I did like that part about D'ris wearing the dead animal skins and the idea of the tachyon portal sending them around in time! (I had to look up 'tachyon' *Bigsmile*).
I'm just wondering if they came back from the future or they jumped up from the past. But I guess if D'ris considered them wearing dead animal skins was barbaric, then they're probably from the future. {c}
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! 'Tis always a pleasure to read one of you pieces!

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