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Weird Science  [18+]
If you can't find a date, build your own!
by Genipher
Review of Weird Science  
Review by Angus
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Howdy, Genipher!
This is good!
I like the idea of this self-described 'nerd' building his own woman, even though his father disagrees and wants him to continue advancing his 'Brainiac Gene' through procreation. Unfortunately that's not going to happen, whether Tiffany shut down or not!
So sad...*Cry*
Great job with the party setting so you could introduce her to your father, and that ending was the icing on the cake!
'Typical woman' *Laugh*
One tiny niggle you might want to check:
"Call her over, son," dad shoved his glasses... (son." Dad...)
Otherwise, bravo!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Genipher! It was a pleasure to read, and have a marvelous day!

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