Hello Devilcoco101,

Welcome to writing.com!

I found your poem in my "Read a Newbie" area - it was one of two highlighted pieces. And wow, you really are a newbie! Just three days! And you've already published this fiery poem! I'm impressed with you!

I really enjoyed reading your personal poem about fire. It flowed well. Your rhyming was perfect. I didn't notice any spelling, grammatical or other errors to distract me from enjoying the poem.

You employed some great imagery (I especially liked "red ball of haze").

You definitely kept the fire theme going throughout the poem and yet I was still surprised at your twists in the last paragraph.

I like how creative you got with the theme of fire. I thought it was clever how you revealed many different ways fire could be interpreted and shared some different reactions various people have to fire in their lives / fiery experiences.

You crafted a great poem and my rating will reflect that observation and analysis. Well done!

Thank you for sharing it here on writing.com!

Hope to see you around!

Write on!
PWheeler

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