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Review of The Cake  
Review by BlueMoon
Rated: E | (3.0)
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I liked this, it seemed so believable. I feel bad for Charlie now. I guess the narrator is good at manipulating or at least acting and making it believable. I could see this happening in real life. I might make cookies instead of cake just b/c it's easier.
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