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 Discrimination Needs to be Stopped.  [E]
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by Sara Smith
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Sara Smith!
For your very 1st piece on here, this is a really nice piece, and I couldn't agree with you more!
I've been around since 1965 and I've seen a lot of hate and discrimination in my life, and you'd think that we would have 'evolved' at least a little bit by now. But we obviously haven't, and unfortunately, now I have to see my Grandannachildren go through this. It sickens me! (My Grandchildren call me 'Grandanna' cuz I always wear a bandanna, so I call them my 'Grandannachildren'! *Bigsmile*)
It's very true that we are equal, and we were all created equal, so when does all the hate stop?
Well done, Sara. I can tell that you're a very mature and intelligent person.
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'Because it’s 2017, almost 2018.' (actually it is 2018!)
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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