Hello SunriseLimited



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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I like the title. It works well with this poem. There is a good rhythm and flow to the poem. Good word selection. Adding in punctuation will help the flow. Also not every line has to be capitalized.

Just a suggestion here for it doesn't sound right, You envy, maybe you are envious.

The poem is interesting. It has a message of sadness and pain as the seasons go by. There is depth, beauty, and power in your poem. I didn't notice any cliches.

Holding in
The
Eternal
Cold

kissed by the Winter Blues

Good imagery here.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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