Hello Sunrise Limited,

Wow, what a powerful poem! You crafted something deeply emotional that left me feeling the icy coldness of the depression you described.

I definitely found the summer stanza the most powerful. I think it started light with autumn and progressed to the deepest depression in summer. Ironic, given all the sunshine and vibrant life at that time of year.

I though ending with "eternal cold" was the perfect touch to this evocative poem.

I'd love to provide some helpful advice but I think it's perfect as written.

Thank you for sharing it!

PWheeler
PS I found it in the "Please Review" section

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