Hello Jim Hall



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I so love faeries and fairies, so when I saw the title to this poem I had to read it. The imagery is great. I could see the story unfold as I read. It is an intriguing tale.

The title works well for this piece and lives up to mt expectations. Each line flows nicely into the next making it easy to understand. The rhythm moves at a good steady pace. I have no suggestions.

As shadows streaked past her
mocked her heartbeat
Compelled by the hypnotic glow atop the hill

These phrases really stood out for me. Great job.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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