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 The Caged Bird  [E]
A twist on Maya Angelou's poem, "I know why the caged bird sings".
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Review of The Caged Bird  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Caged Bird"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*Bird*FIRST IMPRESSION: I just read your thoughtful twisted poem from read and review page. Maya Angelou's beautifully told in her poem how a bird struggling to escape its cage. You beautifully twisted Maya Angelou's poem, "I know why the caged bird sings".

*BurstO*THE POEM: I like the images you have painted here. I liked some phrases play in this poem “knows no bounds” “wide and out” “land on the sand,” “captive in a cage” “perish with age”.

I especially like the rhyming of your poem. It flowed well with your crafted words.

*BurstB* My favorite lines: “a pleasure once so grand.
The bird now yearns to land and soar,
to be free once more.”

*BurstG*SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT:In conclusion, I think you wrote a good poem with a good message.

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