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 The Fall  [13+]
To love is to destroy.
by Antonia
Review of The Fall  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi!

I just read your thoughtful twisted poem from read and review page. It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Fall"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*Bulletg* TITLE:I like this thoughtful poem and the title as well.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images you have sketched here.

*Thumbsup* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear.

*Bulletg* RHYTHM: You have good rhythm in this poem.

*Bulletg* FAVORITE:
“Love and pain,
are one in the same.
It’s the synonym,
I can live with.”

*Bulletg* STRUCTURE & FORM: I like how each line breaks.

*Bulletg* THEME: Yes life is like that. Your poem reminds me a quote 'In Light there is Dark, and in Dark there is Light.' Which was reflects in your poem.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.

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