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The Boy At The Lake  [13+]
A family takes in a boy they find during a weekend getaway.
by Jeff
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Jeff!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Boy At The Lake"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" .

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I'm reviewing for the Review Challenge for March.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a wonderful story. Beautifully told and written. It flowed beautifully with your well-crafted words. I like the suspense builds through this story. It makes the readers worry about your main character.

*BurstP* THE STORY: A family found a boy during a weekend getaway.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: Dialogue floated normally between the characters and I could imagine the scenes where they are.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. You crafted all of them so beautifully.

I enjoyed it reading. Thanks for sharing your awesome work with us.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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