Hi, Beth Barnett , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am member of the "Invalid Item" . I am reviewing "Invalid Item"  as part of the March "Invalid Item" .

First Impression: This poem is composed of Decastich stanzas using rhymed couplets. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm, which is a little rough in some places, carries the main emotions of the poem forward at a good pace.

What I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it emphasized the emotion of hope.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for improvement. Even though the rhythm was rough in some stanzas, it emphasizes the temperament address in the stanza.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it give me something to think about concerning temperament. Write on.




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