Hello Caerlynn



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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Welcome to WDC.

Great title, it works with your poem. This is a very inspirational poem. I can feel the desire to create. Good imagery. There is good rhythm to this piece. And each line flows nicely into the next line, making it easy to understand. Good word selection.

Inspiration
Like lightning
Brightens the sky
Great imagery here. It really speaks.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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