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 Conflicted  [E]
you have built the walls that are now sorrounding me
by flofree
Review of Conflicted  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello flofree

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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Welcome to WDC.

A great title, it works well with this poem. I can feel the emotions written into this piece; sadness, anger, pain. Great imagery, I can see the story unfold as I read.

A suggestion, My hearts broken
I get the idea that you have more than one heart here. Maybe My heart - broken. I'm not sure for you are the creator.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


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