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 | Never Giving Up  [E] I'm a poet. I write poems about what I'm going through or have gone through.  |
| (4.5)  Hello DepressedGirl ! It's so great to have you here at WDC with us! Please don't hesitate to drop me a line if you have any questions or need any help. Why not take a minute to set your portfolio and bio up. We'd love to get to know you some.  I'm so sorry you suffer from depression. But I'm glad you are starting to find your way out. That's not easy to do, but so important! Your piece is from the heart and shows as the reader goes along with you.  Title and Description - The title and description is what pulled me in. I love that you say 'you are never giving up!' that's fabulous! Then the description pulled me on in. Nice job!   Characters Your character shined through brightly. No matter how hard the fight has been, or how hard it continues to be, you will not give up. You will grasp at any bit of light you can and bring it in to you. Beautiful.  Setting - The setting through the whole piece shows the reader your fight, both emotional and physical. It puts the reader right there with you.  What I like about your piece - I liked it all, but mainly that you will never give up As hard as it may be, you will never quit fighting! I truly enjoyed your piece and like it just as it is. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!~ WRITE ON!  Tracey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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