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 Undercover Soul  [E]
This is about all of us. About accepting our true selves. Mind this is really short.
by ~NOBODY
Review of Undercover Soul  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Undercover Soul"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstB*FIRST IMPRESSION: Good start. A very good thoughtful piece and so true. I like the fonts color.

*BurstP* THE STORY: Every person born with unique personality into this world. We born to represent something new.
And if we do or follow another person, dressed like another we never know who we really are. So, we should destroy our false world and accept our true selves.

*BurstP* Favorite lines: You truly said “once you decide to dress yourself as another person who isn't you, you just killed yourself, not literally but emotionally. “

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT:In conclusion, I think you wrote a good article with a good message Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for sharing it with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.

Keep writing!

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