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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good poem about insomnia. Easy to read. I especially liked the way you tell your story.

*BurstP* THE POEM: It reminds me a song line “Only know your love when you let her go”. I like the way you put your emotions and feelings into words. The stream of thought of her that flows together and makes you sleepless.
I like the little rhyming of this poem. It seems you wrote it from personal experiences and I like the way you penned it down.

*BurstP* FAVOURITE: "In my mind, while I stare
Into a ceiling of stars.
Images of us appear
That long for a home."

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

Keep writing!

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