Hello Genipher



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

You asked for help with punctuation, here are some of my ideas.

Capitalize what you consider to be the beginning of the sentence. Add in commas or hyphens to give a pause with thought. Use a period when you feel you are at the end of a sentence. just like writing a story only shorter lines.

The discontent and scratches,
that have filled my bitter soul.
My self-determination,
to reach my earthly goal.

I hope I have helped. Great poem by the way.
Good luck.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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